Zhen's Subsidiary Blog

NaNoWriMo's over, but my novel isn't

Sunday, November 26, 2006

Chapter 1.8 - 1.9

Despite the harrowing experience at the morgue, I was entirely back to where I started, where the days were cold, the work was soul-eroding and I had lost my wife and any motivation to trudge on.

Nightmares attacked me in my sleep. I was unable to recall most of them except for the sheer anxiety enveloping me each time I awoke, and the voice of the man on Mona’s phone, repeating his ominous words over and over again.

“Some people are not happy with what you did. You were warned.”

Parts of the dreams returned to me as I filled yet another survey with information I was collecting from a hesitant telephonic victim. The words would sometimes become twisted, and the voice would speak in different accents or tones, but always becoming a parody of my own, eventually. “Very unhappy, Mona sweetie. I’m unhappy with what you’ve done; you made me think you died! What a fucking, selfish, inconsiderate bitch!” After which I would begin screaming.

And each time the thought of Mona crossed my mind, it became a terrible distraction. Like how it affected me right now, so very difficult to think properly.

“Come on man, what makes you think I’d tell you those things? What’s in it for me? Besides, if you really wanna know, you should’ve come right down here to find out. Especially if you’re from GM like you say you are. They’re Goddamn rich is what I heard.”

“We don’t do visits because that’s very cost-inefficient, sir. We want to know your opinion on those products so that in the future, if GM wants to start a new product line or plan a merger or something, it can do so based on the customers’ needs and preferences. It’s actually for your own good, sir.”

“I don’t have time for this, man. Put me on the do-not-call list, you get it?”

From that point onward, the words just came to my mouth without bothering to make a pass through my brain to be validated first. “Time? Heh, sir, you don’t know nothing about wasting time. My wife’s gone missing for a week, feared dead, I even went to the morgue to identify corpses, damn it, but none of them were her, maybe it would’ve saved so much trouble if it were actually her lying there dead, but thankfully no. And now I wish I could be out there looking for her than in this, frankly, shithole of an office, wasting my time to waste yours. It’s all pretty ironic, isn’t it? Life’s just one, big, enormous irony.”

“What the fuck you smoking, man?”

“Smoke? Oh yeah, you a nigger right? Could you tell me where your people get your fixes from? Pot or coke, I don’t care, I just want to get away from all this, this stupid, absurd situation, even if it’s just for a little while.” I was drawling, but still intelligible.

“Damn, you one crazy motherfucker, that’s what you are!”

“Hey, thanks for the compliment,” I said to nobody in particular - The guy had already hung up.

I laid the phone down and, suddenly feeling all the energy being sucked out of my body, slammed my head onto the table. This drew more attention to me than that failed call had already done. Whispers floated around the cubicles in the office, and like they say, became a roar, one that was possibly referring to me. My inference was confirmed when my manager, a lanky man who’s amiable most of the time except when he doesn’t get his golfing fix (and since it was winter, he didn’t), walked up to me with an incredulous expression on his face.

“What the hell was that, Zack?” We were on a first-name basis around here in this department.

When I was answering him, I seriously did not know. “You know, I’m actually not very sure myself.”

Alexander the manager shook his head disappointedly, his arms crossed but not in a menacing manner. “Look, I know what’s been going on with you, so if you need a break, don’t hesitate to take it.” News of my troubles had spread in the office like wildfire - People here take any gossip they can get. They were that desperate. “Use that time to cool down and clear your head, and do whatever you’ve got to do. You’re just going to burn yourself out and scare the shit out of our respondents if you go on like this.”

I stared up at him blankly and nodded. His words were music to my ears. The reason for my staying here was already gone, so I had no justification for continuing any longer. At least, until I find Mona again.

“In fact, I’d like you to take your leave now. And only come back when you’re sensible again. I’ll get Michelle to count your clocked-in hours today, so don’t worry about your pay, you’ll get it.” Then he added, as an afterthought, “Eventually.”

A lay-off had never felt so good before. I didn’t bother asking Alex if I had to clear my things from my cubicle, or if somebody else was going to replace me in my project - Frankly, I didn’t give a damn. Had I been sacked, I may even have left the building with a stupid grin plastered to my face. Only now did I realise how much I really hated my job - I may never have to use the words “soul-eroding” ever again. My jock mentality took over for a moment, and for a few seconds, I was tempted to flip my co-workers the bird and yell, “Outta here, suckers!” I succeeded in resisting the urge.

And very soon, I was out of there, with only a bag and its contents which I have always taken to my workplace in the morning and have always taken home in the evening. For a while, I was disoriented, for where does a bum like me go on a cold afternoon like this, if there’s nobody or nothing waiting for me, at home or at any other place?

Then I decided that there was only one proper answer to that question: Somewhere with alcohol. I caught a cab and went to the only bar I knew that was open this time of the day. And if I ever drank myself silly there, home was close enough that the staff could carry me home on their shoulders.

***

Paying the cabbie his fare, I got off the road and onto the sidewalk which led to the Citystreets Bar, a small, round-the-clock establishment. At three in the afternoon, the place was sparsely populated. I took a seat at the counter.

“What can I do you for?” the bartender, a man in his mid-forties who may have been a bodybuilder at the prime of his life said.

“A bottle of Bud, dry.” The beer came, the bartender uncapped it and poured the golden liquid into a glass, and I began drowning myself, and my sorrows, in alcohol. The dry, crisp taste of the self-proclaimed King of Beers filled my lips, and then made a bitter journey down my throat as I swallowed it. The mellowing effect came soon after.

I was of the belief that taking alcohol had two effects on a person’s frame of mind. On one hand, alcohol incapacitates you, and makes you slow to react to external stimuli. On the other, alcohol is a catalyst of rage, which leads to the ever present problem of domestic violence and whatnot.

But the one thing that remains constant in both situations is that alcohol shuts off your thought processes, part by minute part until you can barely think anymore. Why do people drink? Because it offered escape from their worries, in the simple form of a drink out of a bottle or can or cask. And it’s legal too, because if we’re on the topic of eliminating thought, marijuana as well as the vast multitude of depressants could (probably) do the job much better. That also explains how alcoholics are born - When they’re too deep in the habit, the beer stops them short from finding out that it’s actually bad for them. Thank God for AA then, for putting all those people back in line.

Life would be so simple if we all had enough to drink, wouldn’t it? Even simpler if they made weed legal. Then, all of men’s social predicaments could be solved, or at least allayed, chemically. No more fighting, no more sadness, no more going crazy over Mona’s whereabouts, just a quiet, peaceful bliss, with a chance of hangover when you come to.

“Free Tommy Chong! Legalise the leaf!” I toasted to the bartender’s bald head, drawing attention from curious patrons.

Man, did I sound like a hippie. Blame it on the beer. I could feel the alcohol doing its work already, as the thought of my wife began drifting to a corner of my mind, to be stored away like an old and unwanted record, to be eventually forgotten. Of course, as I was the only person at the bar counter besides the bartender himself, I was obliged to speak to him - they're there for a reason, anybody can take a beer out of a refrigerator and man a cash register, and those type of people are called 7-Eleven employees, not bartenders - and in the kind of situation I’m in, what else could I really talk about except for my marital woes?

The bottle of Budweiser went empty. I wasn’t satisfied with just one - who is? - so I ordered something stronger. “A bottle of Heineken, please.”

“That was pretty fast,” the bartender commented before serving me my drink. “What’s the problem?”

“You could tell?”

“Work a bar almost everyday for ten years, and you would meet every kind of character known to man. Except the sober ones. I can read people like a book, but of course, there’s the occasional hit-and-miss, too. So this wasn’t a miss, right?”

“Yeah, you got that right.” I drank the beer in the glass, then forwent the glass and drank straight from the bottle.

“You haven’t answered my question. Unless you don’t really wanna talk about it, then I’ll let you be.”

“Will get to it,” I said, downing a few more gulps before wiping some of the beer off my mouth with the back of my hand. “Here’s the story. I have a wife and I love her to death. One day I, came home from work,” I let my sentence hang in mid-sentence to take another swill.

“And?” the bartender urged me to continue. He probably expected another one of those “I caught my wife cheating on me” stories.

“She wasn’t there. She was always there. And she wasn’t there the day after that, or the day after that either. Had me worrying like hell. Then the next day I found her phone lying in our house. In the kitchen, no less, under the refrigerator. And on it, some guy left a message.”

“Uh-huh.” He was really expecting a “I caught my wife cheating on me” story now, I guess.

“He was threatening her. The guy said something about someone not being happy with what she did, and that she was warned. Scared the shit out of me. I thought, hey, maybe it was a prank. But a couple of days later I had to go to the hospital to identify a corpse.”

“Whoa. I’m sorry, man.”

“Thank God it wasn’t my wife, but it was still freaky as fuck, looking at a bog body.”

“Phew, that’s a close one. So, what happened after that?” The bartender seemed genuinely interested in my story now.

“Still up and about, looking, searching, you know the drill,” I replied. Hey, the bottle’s empty - I discovered that I just finished my beer, and began staring at the bottle in my hands, aimlessly.

“Another?” I wasn’t too sure if that was the bartender or me, but either way, another bottle of Heineken soon materialised in my hand.

“Ooh, and did I tell you that I just got laid-off?”

“No, you didn’t.”

“Well, now I did.” Gulp.

“Ouch. I feel for you.”

“It’s probably for the better anyway, I hated that place.” Another gulp.

“What did you do for a living?”

“You won’t believe this - I get paid to annoy people over the phone.” I held the beer bottle to the side of my face. “Hello, good afternoon, would you like to be mindfucked? And the pay was kinda good too.” And another.

“Really? Then why did you get the boot?” he asked while attending to some glasses that needed cleaning.

“Wait, lemme think for a sec.” Gulp, gulp, gulp, then as if by magic, I remembered. “Oh yeah! It’s ‘cause I worked for my wife, and now that my wife’s not around, I don’t need the job! Nice logic, huh?”

“Well, if it’s any consolation, I used to be married, too, until the bitch took my kids and ran to Toronto with a slant-eyed asshole. I’m still waiting for a court order on that.”

“No kidding, eh?”

“Nope. Women can make or break you, but usually it’s the latter. Maybe you got lucky and learned the lesson earlier in life.”

“Nah, not Mona. She’s so wonderful, like an angel.” For a brief moment, the image of my wife appeared before my eyes, complete with a robe, wings, and a halo. “So very pretty,” I continued, reaching out in a vain attempt to touch the illusion as it floated out of my consciousness.

“Must be one heck of a broad.”

“Yessirree.” I took out my wallet, accidentally knocking the Budweiser bottle over (“Whoops”), and showed him a photo that we took during our honeymoon in Hawaii. “Check her out, the most beautifulest creature on the planet,” I boasted, beaming with pride. The bartender took a look at the picture and, captivated by what he saw, squinted his eyes somewhat and brought the photo closer to his face. I flipped my wallet close. “Looky looky no touchy,” I warned, still grinning.

“No wait, I think I’ve seen her before.” He gestured towards my wallet.

“Seen who? Mr. Lincoln? Mr. Jackson? Or our dear and helpful friend, Mr. Benjamin Franklin?” I asked jokingly, referring to the people who lived in my wallet. I showed him the picture again, and he began poring over it like a photographer in a dark room.

“I know this girl!” the bartender exclaimed.

“What?” I was knocked out of my drunken stupor, suddenly alert and sensible again, with a mini-hangover banging on my skull.

“Yeah, she used to work here.”

“That can’t be right, she was always home, she said -” I spoke faster than I could think, “How could she? Hey, you’d better not be pulling my dick on this one.”

“She quit for about two or three weeks now. Hell, I’d be boxing now if we weren’t still looking for someone to fill her shift. She worked from ten to four, by the way. Always came in and left on time, funny girl. But she’s really sweet though - Surprised me at first ‘cause I thought all the hot ones in Phobos were sluts. No offence.”

Confusion and shock came waltzing in without knocking first, as usual. “How long was she - No, when did she first start working here?”

“Not very long. Since September, I think,” the bartender replied. Then, counting the dates on a calendar made out of air, he confirmed, “Come to think of it, some the week after Patriot Day, to be exact.”

Mona had (could have?) been working in this bar for two months and I never was the wiser - It sure told me a lot about the trust in our marriage. “Okay, now, what’s more important is this: Do you have any idea where she is now? Did she tell you anything, when she left?”

“She didn’t tell me personally, but I heard that she took this job offer at VM.”

“VM?”

“You never heard of it? Valles Marineris, the new nightclub in Collins. Get out more often; you’ve still got young blood running in you.”

“I’ll definitely check that place out now.” I finished whatever’s left of my Heineken in one drink. “This is too coincidental to be true. Am I dreaming or hallucinating? Am I still drunk and this is all an illusion? Can you pinch me?”

The bartender gave a backhanded slap across my face, helpfully, causing me to yelp in pain. Then I thanked him as I rubbed my throbbing cheek.

“My pleasure.”

A wake-up call may be fine and dandy, but I still wanted a final confirmation before going on a wild goose chase. “Are you perfectly sure that you’re talking about the right person here?”

“Can’t be any more perfect. None of our usual customers could forget her, if you don’t mind me saying. If you want to,” the bartender paused, then took a look around the bar for a moment before snapping his fingers several times. “Hey, Tony!”

Tony took a break from his conversation and looked towards the bar. “Yeah?”

“You remember that hot Italian chick that used to work the bar at this time of the day?”

“What, you mean Alyssa?”

“Yeah, yeah, Alyssa. This guy here says that she’s his wife.”

“What, you?” Tony said as he eyed me, doubtfully. “Then you’re one lucky bastard, that much I can say to ya.”

“That’s all, Tony.”

“Sure, no problem.” Tony never went back to his original conversation. Instead, the topic of discussion seemed to have changed to theorising on how I could’ve gotten Mona to fall in love with me.

Only then did it hit me. “Hey, bartender, are you saying that the girl in the picture, Alyssa, used to work here?”

“Wasn’t that what we were talking about since your third bottle?”

“My wife’s name isn’t Alyssa - That's her sister’s.”

Friday, November 24, 2006

Chapter 1.6 - 1.7

“Took you a while.” Constanza was sitting by the reception counter in the station, putting away a long outdated copy of the Scientific American to shake my hand, without getting up. “So how’s life without your wife so far?”

“Sucks like you wouldn’t believe.”

“Well, the last time my woman went to her parents’, it was like having cuffs removed. Beer and bowling all weekend long. Uh, while I was off-duty, of course.”

“Thankfully, I’m not yet at that stage of my marriage.”

“Hey, what are you trying to imply, huh?” the cop asked jokingly, trying to force back a full-blown smile which he probably decided may disturb some people. “You’ll get there someday,” he warned. “Anyway, may I listen to the message you told me about?”

“Sure.” I dialled the number, went through the list, and then played the recorded message for him to hear.

“Oh, damn. Sorry for doubting you the other day. Mr. Carter, I can’t tell you if the guy in the message meant it as a real threat or not, but I can tell you that these kinds of things are what sends us cops running around the city looking for missing people. Yup, evidence of foul play is what that is. Was? I hate grammar.”

So much for hoping that he’d clear my doubts for me. “What about the lead that you told me to come down here for?”

He suddenly seemed a little flustered. “Well, that. I need you to come with me, Mr. Carter. Help me out with something.” He stood up and walked out of the station and motioned for me to follow. Standing, Officer Constanza looked a lot less round and a lot more big.

“Is this necessary? And what about my missing persons report?”

“You can fill the report later. And I assure you, what we’ll be doing is absolutely, completely, one hundred percent relevant.” He looked over my shoulder - back into the station - and started waving at someone or something. “Janine! Hey, could you tell Murphy to cover for me ‘til I get back? He owes it to me, by the way.”

I turned around to see the policewoman named Janine, her fingers running accross a keyboard and her eyes glued to a computer monitor. The same voice that first answered my call to the station replied, “As good as done. Stay out of trouble, Louie.”

“Will do,” Officer Louie Constanza answered. He beckoned to me once more, and the both of us were soon walking towards his parked police car with the typical blue-striped, white finish. It was a Chevrolet, but I was unable to name the model.

As though he read my mind, Constanza patted the automobile and announced, proudly, “2001 Chevy Impala, 9C1 for police operations. Heavy duty as hell. How’d you think we outrun crooks, eh? Good old American engineering. By the way, were you one of those kids who’ve always wanted to ride in a cop car with the sirens turned on?”

I wasn’t really sure. “Can you tell me who wasn’t?” I said, just to humour him.

“Heh, well, I won’t let ya. Sit up front,” he said while unlocking the car.

Based on my first impression of him, Constanza’s patrol car was nothing like I would’ve expected. It was meticulously clean. The floor mats were effectively free of gravel and sand. The dashboard was spotless and empty, save for a bobblehead Dalmatian on the passenger’s side. A Little Trees air freshener hung from the rear view mirror, causing the car to smell a little like grapes. A glance at the backseat revealed a handheld vacuum cleaner. Constanza reached out to grab the aforementioned appliance and kept it in the glove compartment. “Murphy - that's my partner, by the way - he's a kinda messy fella,” he explained.

He reminded me of Adrian Monk.

Before long, the car started and hit the road. “Where are we going, anyway?” I inquired.

“You’ll find out.”

“This isn’t a kidnapping, is it?”

“Nah,” he said, laughing. “I just don’t think it’s right to tell you just yet. Come on, let’s talk about something else. What’s your job like, uh, Carter?”

If it is small talk that he wants, I’m fine with it, I guess. “I’m a business researcher and information analyst.” That was as much a euphemism as it was my real job description, since the word “telemarketer” carried with it some sort of stigma.

“Whoa, that sounds important.”

“Not really. That’s just another way of saying that I’m a telemarketer who doesn’t sell stuff over the phone.”

The cop was puzzled. “Then what do you do over the phone?”

“Surveys and enquiries, mostly. It’s a long story, and frankly, a lot more boring than it already sounds.”

“Thank God I’m a cop, then - Car chases and shootouts and donuts, oh my!” Then when he realised that I didn’t get the joke, he helpfully added, “It was sarcasm, man.”

“Oh.” That was followed by a long, awkward silence which I eventually broke. “I thought cops lived for these stuff.”

“Yeah, sure, but like I always say, there’s two sides to every job. Most of the time, it’s just paperwork and patrols and inspections. Personally, I’ve never been in a pursuit or gunfight before. Sure, there were times when I had to point the gun at suspects or settle the occasional domestic squabble with a manhandle - or womanhandle, those fights go both ways, you know what I mean, this is the age of gender equality, heh - but so far, nothing that puts my life in danger. And that’s good, too, because you know, crime is on the rise here in Phobos.”

“You sound disappointed.”

“Well,” he sounded as though he was trying not to say it, “more or less. Kinda. When you’re a kid, and when you watch too much Starsky and Hutch, you wanna be like those guys, right? But when you’re writing reports, it just doesn’t feel like you’re upholding justice, you know? That’s the harsh reality, kid.”

I found myself more amused by him referring to me as “kid” than by his rambling. In any case, I felt at ease. Ever since Mona went missing, I was plagued by a perpetual state of anxiety. I spoke to my co-workers less and less, and I didn’t tell my friends anything - or Mona’s, for that matter - because I didn’t want to worry them unnecessarily.

A quasi-philosophical thought occurred to me: Was I bearing the whole brunt of the anguish because I didn’t share it? Was there such a thing as “spreading out your worries”? And perhaps more importantly, was it the reason for the imaginary clowns and the state of illusion I had earlier?

While I was pondering, Constanza had turned on the radio (“Hope you don’t mind,” he said). At the moment, we were listening to the American Top 40’s number one song for the week.

“She take ma muhnay!” the cop sang, his head bobbing to the beat (and so was the Dalmatian), “When ah’m in need!”

Kanye West’s musical rant was all the conversation we required on the way to our destination, Constanza singing all the words off-key, but entertaining nonetheless. It was like watching a Village Person dropping disco and picking up rap. And I was guilty of joining him.

***

“The hospital?” My worries multiplied tenfold as we exited the warmth of the Impala and entered the cold of the winter.

Constanza locked the car and then gave me a withdrawn look. “Okay, Carter, I’m not gonna hide it from you anymore. Please keep cool when I tell you this, alright?”

“By saying that, you only make it worse.”

“Aww, crap.” He held his forehead in his hands for a moment, then said, “Alright, I’ll cut to the chase. On Friday night, I think that was the day you came over, we got reports of dead bodies being found in Petersen’s Mire.”

Shit. My heart began to jog.

“Two men, plus a woman in her late twenties, found murdered and dumped in the bog.”

It was racing now, as it had been earlier today.

“I brought you here because I wanted you to identify the woman.”

The jester was laughing again, in his bright purple and red chequered costume, hanging just at the corner of my eye.

“See if it’s your wife.”

The deafening, chilling howl sent shivers up and down my spine, and my legs and arms, and every extremity, putting my whole body in a nervous tic. My shoulders were raised to my neck and my eyes were fixed to the ground. I could see the cop’s mouth move, but could hardly hear him over the din. He spoke for such a long, long time.

“Carter? Mr. Carter? Are you alright?”

Laugh, howl, guffaw, cackle, snigger, titter, somebody had been reading a thesaurus!

“Carter!”

I snapped out of it. I looked up at Constanza, stared at him for a second and nodded.

“Please,” he said, laconically.

I nodded again. He patted me on the back, and after that we began walking to the morgue. As we did, I caught on to why he was so uncharacteristically - at far as most Phobos City cops go - friendly and genial in the car. That, I believed, was to prepare me for the bad news he was about to break upon my currently fragile emotional constitution, the sedation of a delirious cow before sending it to the slaughter.

I’ve not been in a hospital in quite some time. The smell of disinfectant was overwhelming, and it added to the sedative effect. Maybe they didn’t put whatever it is that these establishments put in the water, but in the hundreds of automatic air freshening devices planted on the walls inside the building.

Whatever it was that they put, it might be what’s stopping me from thinking straight, too. Or perhaps it’s just the thought that my wife, my dear, beloved Mona, might be dead that’s unscrewing the bolts in my head.

Down the hallway and up the elevator and down some stairs, and we were soon outside the morgue. Constanza spoke to a nurse on duty, who was already informed in advance, and showed her his identification. We followed her into the room.

The nurse warned that the experience of identifying a dead person has its traumatic effects, et cetera, to which I said that I didn’t have much of a choice, did I? Then the ever tactful cop thanked me and said that I could be helping the department a great deal if I could identify the body, realised what he implied by that, slapped his forehead, and shut the hell up. Good.

The nurse then led me to one of the cold chambers and pulled out a body on the giant drawer-like contraption. Frigid air, so much colder than what was found outside the building, filled the room. I shivered, as much from terror as I did from the sudden, passing chill - I've never seen someone dead like this before, they’re always in suits and dresses and laid to rest peacefully in caskets. I took a very deep breath, closed my eyes, heard only the pounding of my heart once again, walked up to the body, and opened my eyes, looking down.

A very pale female face, darkened a disgusting blue, green and brown hue by the peat waters, stared back at me. The woman’s hair, blonde locks that were once very rich and painstakingly styled and taken care of, was bleached dull and matted. Like most bog bodies, she was perfectly preserved, down to the ghastly expression on her face; unlike the bloated corpses found washed up on beaches and riverbanks, trapped in the time of her death, a living photograph of the moment she was callously dumped by the very same bastards that robbed her of her life. Goddamn, unforgivable, pitiless bastards.

I sobbed uncontrollably, biting my knuckle. Constanza held my shoulder in his hand as I stood there in the morgue, the world around me completely blocked out except for the touch on my shoulder and the woman on the table.

“You okay? Is that your wife?”

A ghost of a smile appeared on my lips, and there weren’t any clowns in sight.

“I’ve never met this woman in my entire life.”

I heard the soft sighs of relief from both the cop and the nurse. Eventually, the crying stopped and I regained my composure.

“Here. Some tissues,” the nurse offered. I gladly took them and cleared the mess from my face. I really needed them. The past couple of hours had been one hell of an emotional rollercoaster ride for me, and it left me nauseating. On my way out of the hospital, I stopped by the restroom to regurgitate my breakfast.

Thursday, November 23, 2006

Chapter 1.3 - 1.5

The only indication to whatever Mona was up to tonight was written very concisely on a pink Post-it note she placed on the back of the front door before she left; she was obsessed about these sticky pieces of paper. In any case, it read, in her wavy handwriting:

Baby, you’ll have to make your own dinner tonight, I’ve got something important to do. I’ll be back late, so don’t wait up for me!

Love, Mona

I removed the note, crunched it in my hand and dropped it into the trashcan as I made my way to the kitchen. I wasn’t totally useless around the house without my superhuman wife around. I opened the refrigerator to see if there was anything that I could make without too much hassle - Eggs, cheese, milk, jam, some apples, broccoli, lettuce, and several other vegetables I did not know the name to. As I ran the list through my head, the first dish that came to my mind was omelettes. But that fit the definition of too much hassle, so I scrapped the idea, thought twice about inspecting the freezer, decided not to, and finally went to the phone to make a call for a delivery.

A male voice, which somehow made me think of a long-haired Mike Myers in a T-shirt and baseball cap, answered my call. “Domino’s Pizza Phobos City, thirty minutes or it’s free. You’re Mr. or Mrs. Carter, right?” People always liked businesses with a personal touch, like an old friend whom you’ve not spoken to for a very long time but suddenly need to borrow their services; for an international food delivery service like Domino’s, having their customers’ names and addresses in a database helped towards building that illusion.

“That’s right.”

“Go ahead and name your poison, sir.”

Poison? I shook of the word from my head. “Alright, I’d like to order a regular thin-crust double pepperoni with extra, and by that I mean extra, cheese. Don’t be stingy with it.”

“Extra cheese,” the man - or probably more appropriately, boy - said to himself. “You sure about that, sir? Too much cheese is bad for you, y’know.”

This was new. “What are you, trying to lose a customer or something?”

“No, no, not like that, sir. We at Domino’s are always, uh.” He began to sound as though he was reading off a teleprompter or notice of some sort; slow, robotic, with pauses in between words and completely lacking of nuances. He coughed before continuing, “Yeah, we’re always looking out for our customer’s best interests. Obesity is a killer, sir. Did you know that sixty percent of Americans are overweight?” Immediately after that, I heard a muffled “We are? Whoa.”

“Look, I just want my pizza with extra cheese. I am only a hundred and seventy. If there’s anything I were to die from, it’d be from hunger because of you giving me a hard time. If you want, you can have the delivery guy make sure that I’m not one of the 60%, okay?”

“Chill, sir, I’m just doing my job to, uh, inform the masses. So you’re sure about your extra cheese?”

I gave him the most irritated-sounding “Yes” that I could come up with.

He sighed. “Let me repeat your order again, sir. Regular sized thin-crust double pepperoni with a whole lot of extra cheese.”

“I’m surprised you remembered,” I said, sarcastically.

“What?”

“Nothing.”

“Okay, sir, you live in the Thornton Apartments at the Far East Side, is that right?”

“Same place since the last time I called.”

“That’s good, sir. Would you like any side orders with your pizza?”

“A bottle of Vanilla Coke will be nice.”

“May I suggest Diet Coke for a change?”

“Which part of not giving me a hard time did you not understand?”

“Hey, just doing my job here. I take that as a no.”

“Damn right it is.”

“That’ll be six dollars and forty-five cents, sir. It’ll reach your place in thirty minutes, or the pizza’s free! Not for the Coke, though. Thank you, sir, and,” he said, as insincerely as possible, “Have a nice day.”

That was by far one of the more interesting phone conversations I’ve ever had with a Domino’s guy. The times are changing. Less than a decade ago, McDonald’s and its ilk wouldn’t give a damn if you turned fat from their food. In fact, they hoped you supersized everything you bought. And we, the grossly stupid Americans with God-knows-how-much lard rerouting our synapses, are almost always inclined to do exactly that, drawn to the trap of obesity by their saccharine sweet smiles and pretty packaging.

The best part of this nationwide dilemma was that the fat people strike back. Once they’ve gone over the edge, they’d return with a vengeance, and with teams of lawyers by their sides, ready to sue the corporations to kingdom come for not warning them that binging on fast food is bad for you. People like Caesar Barber. When the corporation and the obese go loggerheads in the courtroom, it’s hard to decide who was more in the wrong - the companies that sell fattening food or the people who are caught overeating them.

An idiot could tell that I was on Ronald’s side.

And thus, like an enormous disclaimer, fast food outlets now remind their customers to eat the healthier choices on their menus, Exhibit A: The Domino’s guy. In so doing, they are cleared of any responsibility in the event that someone grows morbidly obese. People like Caesar Barber. It reminded me of how God had told Adam and Eve not to eat the fruit from the Tree of Life, and when they did, He had every reason to expel them from Eden. It’s not as if they weren’t warned.

When my mind stopped wandering, I immediately prepared the required $6.45 in exact change and placed it on the coffee table. I took my mobile phone out, selected the timer function and set it to 30 minutes. Then I used it to make a call to Mona. There was a ringing but no answer, so I decided to take a warm shower and perhaps try calling again later.

The feeling of hot water scalding my skin after a long, cold day at work loaded me with awareness, hopefully enough to last through the evening.

The doorbell rang while I was still in the bathroom. I didn’t bother to change, wrapped the towel around my waist instead, and took the money from the coffee table in the hall and went to answer it, realised that I had set the timer for 30 minutes, went to pick up my mobile, saw the numbers 00:13:26 (it was counting down), shrugged, put the phone back down, and opened the door.

“Domino’s pizza. Mr. and Mrs. Carter’s?” the delivery guy said.

“That’s me.”

“Here’s your regular thin-crust double pepperoni with extra cheese. And your Vanilla Coke. That’ll be six dollars and forty-five cents.” He gave me the bag with everything in it, and I passed him the cash. As he did, he said, as-a-matter-of-factly, “You are thin.”

“Yeah, you go tell your friend that now, will you?” I almost rolled my eyes.

“No problemo, Mr. Carter. Good evening,” he said, tipping his Domino’s employees’ cap slightly. His job done, he promptly left.

Now I had pizza, a bottle of soda, and nobody else around. I did what anybody would do under such circumstances on a winter evening; I watched TV.

Surfing the channels, I couldn’t find anything too interesting to watch. Here’s Dr. Phil teaching people how to diet. I found it extremely ironic for he wasn’t a paragon of fitness himself. Flip. Stephen Colbert was elaborating on The Wørd of the day, “Asia”. I didn’t feel like watching political satire today; those kinds of things wear me out. Flip. Somebody was demonstrating something which replaced several other things that you would use in the kitchen. I don’t own any of those things that they claim need replacing. Flip. A drama on undertaking. Flip. A medical drama with beautiful people. Flip. Another medical drama with beautiful people, except for the boss who, from the looks of it, wasn’t just unattractive but also excessively caustic, and walked with a limp, too.

The pizza was getting cold, so I gave up on TV and indecision, and popped the Fight Club DVD into the player instead for the umpteenth lonely night this year. It never gets old, at least not for me. I found the similarities between the narrator and me more evident with each viewing, and eventually, it became an addiction, watching an incarnation of myself beat the hell out of people. And it’s also much less mind numbing, in the literal sense, than watching a talk show.

I bit into a slice of pizza. They remembered the extra cheese. I was happy.

But for reasons unknown, for I wasn’t actually too tired anyway, I didn’t make it past the scene where the narrator and Tyler Durden went to steal human fat from a medical facility. I probably fell asleep.

But it didn’t matter whether I stayed awake or not - Mona didn’t come home that night.

***

She didn’t come home the next day, either. Or the day after that. Each time I tried calling her, she didn’t answer. I became very worried. In hindsight, I might even have been delusional, because on Friday, after work, I made a trip to a police station near my apartment.

“I’d like to make a missing persons report.”

The officer on duty seemed like one of those that you’d normally find in 90s sitcoms - he was rotund, wore glasses, and had a half-eaten box of Bavarian Crème donuts on the table, exuding a vibe which screams of ineptitude. I have learned to give people the benefit of a doubt, however. “Did your kid go missing at the playground or something, mister...?”

“Carter. No, I don’t have any children. It’s my wife.”

“Your wife? Hmm… May I see your I.D. please, Mr. Carter?”

I flipped my wallet open and retrieved my identification card, then passed it to the cop. He examined it for a while, and I soon realised that he was trying to find a way to say something without appearing to insult my intelligence. He returned me my card and said, “You see, Mr. Carter, we get a lot of reports everyday, mostly kids or teenagers who go missing - they give us the most problems, Goddamn teens, especially when they start drinking, all hell breaks loose - but for adults, they have the, uh, the constitutional right to go wherever they please without having to tell you first.”

I expected him to continue. He probably expected me to reply, but I didn’t, so he gave me a very suspicious look instead.

“Your wife is an adult, right? As in, eighteen and above?”

“Is there any other way?”

“Who knows? You could be a hillbilly or something, I can’t tell. Phew. Had me going there. Well, unless your wife is, say, a retard - pardon my French - or might pose a danger to society, we won’t enter her in our database. Not even if she’s an alcoholic or something, that’s an individual’s choice, even if it’s ruining her life. So is your wife either?”

“Definitely not a retard,” I groaned. “As for being a danger to society, well, not that I know of.”

“Do you suspect foul play?”

“Yes. I’ve been trying to call her for two days, and she doesn’t pick up, it’s driving me insane. She always calls if she has something to do.”

“Two days?”

“That’s right.”

“Well, Mr. Carter, I’m sorry, but I don’t think it’s appropriate for you to lodge a report yet, especially not so soon. Who knows, she could’ve left her phone somewhere and had been meaning to call you or something. She doesn’t run away often, right?”

“That’s not the point, I want to lodge a report so that if anything comes up that I should know of, the cops can call me.” I could feel my temperature rising.

“But we don’t send out cops to search for your wife just because you want us to, sir. If you really need someone to look for her, without evidence of foul play, you’d need to get a private eye.”

“So if there was foul play involved, knock wood, you’d wait until the foul playing is over before doing something about it? Haven’t you heard of prevention being better than a cure?”

“Sir, we get about ten to twenty reports like yours each day. Almost all the time, it’s some useless parent who left their children unattended in the park or in the apartment or at a neighbour’s place, and half the time these are false alarms and are resolved within the day. That’s a lot of work to cover, you know. So unless you have concrete proof of, or have every reason to believe that there was foul play involved, we can’t do anything.” He paused for effect, and then summarised his short lecture on the reasons he couldn’t help me out into a single word: “Procedure.”

“Frankly, that sounds like balls to me.”

His composure remained calm and collected, evidence of his experience in facing people like me day in, day out. “Tell you what, Mr. Carter, you don’t worry about your wife for now, give it a few days, maybe she’d come back.” Then he adopted a somewhat sinister tone. “After that, if you really feel that something has happened, and with proof, if possible, you come back here and ask for Constanza - that's me. Okay?”

At that, I could only afford to shrug.

Then I said, “I doubt that I’ve ever said or heard the words “foul play” so many times over such a short span of time before,” before turning to leave.

***

I never stopped trying to contact Mona, hoping that somehow, officer Constanza’s theory was correct. Besides, his was the more reasonable one. Now, I wasn’t sure of what to think of anymore.

It was a Sunday. It’s hard to believe how quickly I was returning to my old bachelor self, like a college student living away from his parents for the first time. Almost all my food was delivered, or packed, resulting in a diet consisting mostly of carbohydrates and fat. And I won’t eat out because I do not want to be caught eating in a posh restaurant all by my lonesome self.

The main course on today’s bachelor lunch menu was a packet of Japanese instant noodles. I was waiting for the pot of water to boil when I decided to make the ubiquitous phone call, again. It had become a routine for me, making the call and failing to get a response. My rationale for continuing this exercise in futility was based on the fact that Mona’s phone rings - which meant that it was operational, and if it had been turned on for the past few days, there’s a possibility that somebody was charging it after each use.

The call connected, and I heard a ringing sound. The one I’m referring to wasn’t coming from my phone.

Instead, I heard - or at least, thought I heard - a mild whining noise in the kitchen, soft enough that it could hardly be heard over the sound of a stove fire, like the permanent, unending hum of a muted TV.

I turned the flame off and tried to locate the sound, but by now the kitchen was already silent. Somehow, subconsciously and without logic, my mind put two and two together and I pressed the redial button on my mobile.

I could hear the whine again. It had a tune, and I recognised it almost immediately: “Tomorrow” from Little Orphan Annie, one of the songs Mona would lose herself in whenever she was cleaning or cooking or washing or vacuuming. Unsurprisingly, she used the MP3 version for her phone’s ringing tone.

With my phone still making the call, and Annie still singing ominously in the background, I frantically searched the kitchen for Mona’s phone. Drawers were opened, cupboards ransacked, cups and dishes were pushed about. Each time Annie stopped singing, I would press redial, and she’ll begin calling out to me again, a high pitched, foreboding wail, and I would follow the voice.

Eventually, I found Mona’s phone stuck in a gap beneath the refrigerator. I took more time trying to pull it out than I did trying to find it.

I flipped the clamshell phone open. The words on the screen told me that it had received 64 missed calls; most of them were probably from me. I played with the buttons on the phone for a moment, trying to figure out my next course of action. Then I decided to check her voice messages. I dialled the number to retrieve them, and a little menu appeared on the screen, listing each message along with the date and time it was received. I selected the most recent one (Friday 11/18/05, 17:21):

“Hey, Mona sweetie. I hope you get this. Well, if you do, that means you’re alright. I hope. Please, please, call me, okay? And come home. Love ya.”

I cringed at the sound of my own voice. I selected the next on the list (Wednesday 11/16/05, 12:10):

“I’m coming home for dinner tonight, hope to see you soon. You scared me shitless last night, did you know that? Well, whatever. Call me if you get this, okay sweetie? Bye.”

The last message on the list caught my eye, because it was the only one received on the day Mona stopped coming home (Tuesday 10/16/05, 14:42):

“Mona,” a male voice said very loudly, with a hint of pretentiousness and an accent I couldn’t place. The voice became much softer after that. “Some people are not happy with what you did. Very bad people. You were warned.”

Needless to say, I became utterly confused and unnerved. Panicking, my mind was invaded by thoughts, each of them trying to spin a story from that single, short, voice message. I couldn’t stop myself from imagining Mona being kidnapped, being raped, being killed, and in more ways than one. Scenes of my naked wife being passed around a dirty room by men, of her being slapped and punched and beaten, of her being shot in the head at point blank range, materialised deep in the recesses of my brain, refusing to go away, dancing and mocking me like a vile jester who had stolen the king’s crown, and who had insisted on keeping it. The jester’s laughs boomed in my ear, I dropped Mona’s phone and with my hands pressed hard against my ears, trying to block the laughter out, and succeeded only in keeping it in.

I crumpled to the floor, against the kitchen wall, screaming. My heart was pounding against my chest, and I couldn’t tell if it the pain was real or not.

Could it have been a prank? Or was it one of her friends, just trying to be funny? I tried to assure myself that all was okay, but who was I kidding, this was completely uncharacteristic of my wife, she never does these things, Goddammit! The images continued to fade in and out of my sight, so very vividly, still smirking, mocking. The men had become clowns, in children-friendly, colourful costumes, a nightmarish contradiction to the obscenities they were performing on my wife. Closing my eyes to stop myself from seeing the terrifying sight was as futile as trying to stop the jester’s laugher, for it blocked out reality and made the imagined more intense.

I could feel the warm tears rolling down my cheeks, although I didn’t remember crying at all.

Then I remembered the foul play spiel I received at the police station, as well as Officer Constanza’s advice. And just as suddenly, everything became clear again. The images disappeared as instantaneously as they came, and my racing heart slowed down. I wiped the tears from my eyes, took a prolonged breather, shook off everything that just happened and got up to call the police.

“Hello, Phobos City Police Department, 42nd Precinct, how may I help you?” It was a lady.

“I need to speak to Officer Constanza.”

“Constanza? And to whom am I speaking to, sir?”

“Tell him it’s Mr. Carter, the guy who’s missing his wife.”

“You hold on a second, sir.”

The all-too-familiar ragtime tune was played as I was put on hold. This made me believe that a tenth of all phones with the ability of putting people on hold played “The Entertainer”, while another tenth opted for “Für Elise”.

“Constanza speaking. Mr. Carter?”

“Yes it’s me.”

“Crap, I was wondering when you’d call. I sort of have a lead for you.”

“A lead?”

“Oh wait, you must be calling because you either found some evidence of foul play or your wife came home. Please tell me it’s not the first.” His intonation was that of a man doing the vocal equivalent of crossing his fingers.

“I wish it wasn’t. I’ve been trying to call my wife all this while, but it turned out that she left her mobile lying around the house.”

“And?” he said, expectantly.

“I listened to one of the voice messages that some guy left on her phone. It sounded like a threat.”

There was a short pause before Constanza replied. “When did you get this? I mean, when did the guy leave his message?”

“Tuesday afternoon, the day my wife stopped coming home.”

“Are you sure it’s not a prank?”

“That’s what I was hoping you’d be able to help me decide, if it’s the real deal or just a very stupid, scary joke.” Then I recalled that he was trying to tell me something earlier. “What was that you told me about a lead?”

“Well, it’s this, um,” he trailed off. “Look, just come down to the station, will ya? Before I get off work, it’s a Sunday, y’know. Oh, and bring your wife’s phone along, it might be useful.”

“I’ll be there in fifteen.”

“See ya.”

I hung up the call. To borrow the clichéd line: I had a very bad feeling about all this.